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  <title>As the Cardinal Flies</title>
  <subtitle>click, click, click goes the keyboard</subtitle>
  <author>
    <name>graycardinal</name>
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  <updated>2013-10-29T08:47:23Z</updated>
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    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2010-05-04:509203:29541</id>
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    <title>For Relative Values of Pi...</title>
    <published>2013-10-29T08:47:23Z</published>
    <updated>2013-10-29T08:47:23Z</updated>
    <category term="commentary"/>
    <category term="train wrecks"/>
    <category term="television"/>
    <category term="fandom: castle"/>
    <dw:music>"Castle" theme (of course)</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>confused</dw:mood>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;As you might expect, I'm not talking about the mathematical constant.&amp;nbsp; No, I'm increasingly puzzled by developments on &lt;em&gt;Castle&lt;/em&gt;, specifically with respect to Alexis' newfound Significant Other.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As far as I can tell, absolutely no one in the viewing audience actually admits to liking "Pi".&amp;nbsp; At best. there's a camp that contends that yes, Alexis might reasonably fall for someone like Pi -- laid-back, over-the-top countercultural, and all too (supposedly) similar in emotional terms to Castle himself as he might have been at that age.&amp;nbsp; And over the half dozen episodes of the new season thus far, we've been told repeatedly that Alexis is suddenly much more in tune with Pi than she is with her father.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;And that's the trouble -- we've been &lt;em&gt;told&lt;/em&gt; this, not shown it, and what we've been shown is greatly at odds with what we've been told.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;If we're to believe what Alexis has told her father, she met Pi during her college-sponsored Costa Rica trip, and the two immediately bonded -- to the extent that she brought him back to the Castle loft with her, and has now moved into an apartment with him.&amp;nbsp; She hasn't said so in so many words, but both Castle and the audience are clearly meant to assume that the two are sleeping together.&amp;nbsp; And yet onscreen, Alexis and Pi have demonstrated absolutely no romantic chemistry, nor even much in the way of ordinary interaction.&amp;nbsp; Instead, Pi spends most of every scene in which he appears interacting with Castle,&amp;nbsp;rather than with Alexis&amp;nbsp;-- and driving him up the wall, often with considerable justification.&amp;nbsp; &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This is, in a word, weird.&amp;nbsp; The same writers who've spent the last five-plus seasons making us believe in the Castle/Beckett relationship seem to be going out of their way to make us &lt;em&gt;disbelieve&lt;/em&gt; the Alexis/Pi relationship.&amp;nbsp; It makes no sense whatever -- and I'm not sure at this point how they can write themselves out of the situation.&amp;nbsp; There's no drama in breaking up a relationship that we weren't invested in to start with, and it's much too late to retcon chemistry that should have been there from Pi's first appearance.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have to think that the writers have &lt;em&gt;something&lt;/em&gt; in mind for this arc; for all that the &lt;em&gt;Castle&lt;/em&gt; creative team has its blind spots, writing romantic relationships hasn't been one of them.&amp;nbsp; But I can't for the life of me see where they're going with this.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=graycardinal&amp;ditemid=29541" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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  <entry>
    <id>tag:dreamwidth.org,2010-05-04:509203:20823</id>
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    <title>How I Spent My Yuletide Vacation, er, Challenge</title>
    <published>2011-01-07T10:58:25Z</published>
    <updated>2011-01-07T11:02:10Z</updated>
    <category term="exchange: yuletide"/>
    <category term="writing process"/>
    <category term="fandom: solstice"/>
    <category term="commentary"/>
    <category term="fic"/>
    <dw:music>"I'm Going to Go Back There Someday" (Gonzo, in &lt;i&gt;The Muppet Movie&lt;/i&gt;)</dw:music>
    <dw:mood>accomplished</dw:mood>
    <dw:security>public</dw:security>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;So this is a trifle belated...but here's the scoop on my contribution to Yuletide 2010: I wrote just one story, but it was a fairly long one. &amp;nbsp;&lt;a href="http://archiveofourown.org/works/142016"&gt;The House on the Hilltop&lt;/a&gt;, for &lt;a href="http://archiveofourown.org/users/philosapphic/"&gt;philosapphic&lt;/a&gt; came in at a little over 6100 words.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;The fandom&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; is L. J. Smith's &lt;a href="http://www.powells.com/biblio/1-9781416998402-0"&gt;The Night of the Solstice&lt;/a&gt;&amp;nbsp;-- &lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___1" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://graycardinal.dreamwidth.org/20823.html#cutid1"&gt;or more accurately,&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___1" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;The story: &lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;Aside from a brief framing sequence, "The House on the Hilltop" is &lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___2" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://graycardinal.dreamwidth.org/20823.html#cutid2"&gt;a prequel to the series proper,&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___2" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;span class="cut-wrapper"&gt;&lt;span style="display: none;" id="span-cuttag___3" class="cuttag"&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b class="cut-open"&gt;(&amp;nbsp;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-text"&gt;&lt;a href="https://graycardinal.dreamwidth.org/20823.html#cutid3"&gt;The DVD Extras:&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;b class="cut-close"&gt;&amp;nbsp;)&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;div style="display: none;" id="div-cuttag___3" aria-live="assertive"&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=graycardinal&amp;ditemid=20823" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/&gt; comments</content>
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